Rereading my injustice letter it does seem that I spit out the facts and figures of the minimum wage to the audience. This is certainly not a good method to use especially if I am trying to introduce change to the injustice. A more respective and polite manner ought to be used to bring up the information in a way that serves as a reminder of the laws to the audience.
In my audience analysis paper I introduced the idea of using some emotion appeal to try to soften up the rigid minds of the government officials to whom I am writing. Using some emotion appeal couldn’t hurt and it would provide a good break from all the facts presented throughout my letter. More time in the letter should be spent speaking to the audience about the issue opposed to telling them about the issue.
I’m not sure whether our letter was supposed to be in actual business letter format including the heading address and all those parts of the letter. I thought I was to focus on what would be the body of the letter and not worry about the other parts of the letter. If I was to contain all the other factors that make up business format I would understand how to format the letter correctly but if not I am sure what conventions I am to follow.
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